Date: Thu, 28.06.12 15:33
Earth or the Earth
From: "alexander koryagin"
Hi, mark lewis! How are you?
on Thursday, 28 of June, I read your message to Roy Witt
about "Earth or the Earth"
ak>>> [...In reality, women use Chanel perfume to attract men. And men's
ak>>> cheap cologne attracts women]
RW>>> ...Women use Chanel perfume to attract, while women succumb to
RW>>> ...cheap men's cologne.
ml>> "cheap men" or "cheap cologne"?
RW>> "men's" implys ownership...
IMHO "men's" can serve as an adjective.
ml> yes and "cheap" can be a modifier of "men" or "cologne"...
ml>> Women use Chanel to attract but succumb to men's cheap cologne.
RW>> Both your and my versions are correct...
ml> and mine is short enough to make a tagline from ;)
Here is another variant, which IMHO smoother:
Women spend heaps of money buying Chanel, but finally succumb to cheap colone.
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Alexander (yAlexKoyandex.ru) + 2:5020/2140.91
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